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I've always liked subtle horror. This piece, in which the narrator loses awareness of the horror, is especially good.

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Glad you enjoyed it. I was quite proud of this piece because it came quickly, and the parts seemed to fit well together.

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Indeed, they do!

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Wonderful, shivery tale. Ghost stories are so hard not to overdo or make cartoonish, and this is just a beautiful, subtle chill. Masterfully done!

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Thanks!

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Oh, I had to go back and read again! It was so creepy.

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Thanks. I’ve been struggling to finish two different stories, but this one came together almost perfectly.

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