I think the ones the writer really enjoys writing always shine through. I’m glad you had fun with this. It was a strong setting, with a lot of mystery surrounding obviously the woman and what the motivations were. Your imagery was just that- fantastical. Another world, somewhere.
'a gem in a sea of gold'--beautiful imagery. This is really good!
Thank you! I had fun writing it, and I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
I think the ones the writer really enjoys writing always shine through. I’m glad you had fun with this. It was a strong setting, with a lot of mystery surrounding obviously the woman and what the motivations were. Your imagery was just that- fantastical. Another world, somewhere.