I’m simultaneously horrified yet hooked on every word. I’m about 2/3rds done, but I wanted to give my thoughts immediately. Dr. K is so true to his character yet incredibly unique. I love the touch of Dante’s Inferno here. Amazing
Wow, that was incredible! The way you mixed real world events with surreal dream logic was fascinating to read, and the story was thrilling and heartbreaking at the same time.
I’m simultaneously horrified yet hooked on every word. I’m about 2/3rds done, but I wanted to give my thoughts immediately. Dr. K is so true to his character yet incredibly unique. I love the touch of Dante’s Inferno here. Amazing
Agree the Dante track is fantastic! Very cool. And weirdly I also coincidentally used Carmen. Are they same person?
It’s funny how these things rhyme. I noticed a couple of odd overlaps between my story and The Chronicler’s.
That was cleverly all the way through. Beautifully written too!
So good - love the causal loop effect. I think I need to read it again now!
Throughly enjoyed, sitting in a Cafe sipping chia.
Wow, this was cleverly done! I especially liked how you revealed the code.
Thanks. A lot of that was done on the fly , because I didn’t know where I was going in the beginning.
Wow, that was incredible! The way you mixed real world events with surreal dream logic was fascinating to read, and the story was thrilling and heartbreaking at the same time.