This was such a fun story, with all kinds of twists and turns! I can't wait for part 2.
Also I love the way you casually describe the region. It makes the characters feel familiar and like they belong in the world. Like we're taking a look into what's happening rather than the moment to moment action being curated which I really enjoy.
That was so cool. Great rhythm and timing. A helluva ride, that's for sure!
Thanks!
This was such a fun story, with all kinds of twists and turns! I can't wait for part 2.
Also I love the way you casually describe the region. It makes the characters feel familiar and like they belong in the world. Like we're taking a look into what's happening rather than the moment to moment action being curated which I really enjoy.
Thanks. I re-read it this afternoon and remembered how much fun I had writing the story.